Before I signed up for this course
in the first place, I knew it would be one of the most challenging classes that
I had ever taken thus far in my life.
Although I was scared being a high school student in a college course, I
tried my hardest hoping that my hard work would compare, and be good enough to
compare, to the work being turned in by the college students. My initial goals at the beginning of the
semester were to become a better writer and experience some college courses and
understand the expectations in these high level courses before I continue on my
college education in a larger environment.
I accomplished both of these
goals. I have enjoyed the experience
that I have had while taking this course.
I truly believe that taking this course has prepared me for more college
courses in the future. I have learned
how to communicate with college professors and peers taking the same
course. Although I plan on attending a
larger four-year college, I believe that this course has prepared me for the
challenges I will face in many college courses.
Along with understanding how to communicate and carry myself in a
college course, I have understood and begun becoming a better writer. I have learned how to edit and reword my essays
to sound more professional. Researching
was also a major component of what I learned how to do correctly and accurately
this semester.
During the research process I
learned how to correctly study a specific topic. Just using Google may not help to find the best
and most correct information possible. I
learned how to use a database in order to find more credible sources. Before I began the research process, I did
not know that that using a database would help specify and find scholarly
articles for the exact topic I needed to find.
The research process came pretty
naturally to me. I am a very curious
person and being told to find more information about a specific topic was
intriguing to me. I found it much more
beneficial using a database to locate information rather than just doing a
regular Google search.
The parts of my paper that I believed
will be liked the best by my instructor are the facts that I found through my
research and the interview I used from my friend. I think that the facts and statistics that I
found truly support my thesis statement made at the beginning of my paper. I also think that the story that I received
from my interview added a nice little touch so that the readers of my paper
could visualize one of the many different outcomes within a family. I carefully wrote, adjusted, and rewrote each
part of my paper many times to make it exactly what I wanted to say. My audience for this paper is the rising
generation especially, but to the society within the United States
overall. My purpose was to ultimately
raise people’s awareness of what could eventually happen in society because of
marriage and family. I worked very hard
and long on this paper and I believe that my argument is sound, the facts found
support my thesis, and the way that I wrote and discussed the information is
very professional and well written.
I am not very advanced when it comes to
being technologically versed, but through the course of this semester I have
learned how to convert my paper from a Mac to a Windows computer. I have also gotten better with my typing
speed and my understanding about how computers work in general.
One of the most useful hints I have found
useful while taking this class has been understanding the true meaning behind creating
a thesis. When writing a thesis you have
to state your “freaking point” to your reader, and understanding this helped me
when I began writing any papers. This
course has ultimately been very beneficial for me and I am glad that I had the
opportunity to take it while I am still in high school.
Written By - Kelsey Robison
Great draft! Yes, you're not the only high school student in my comp 1 courses this semester, and they all agree with you that it's beneficial to them to have taken it now.
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