They seem to be just passing through. As I looked through the blog entitled "Just Passing Through" I found the background quite interesting. While I was reading, though the background was quite fun and exciting, I also found it to be a little distracting. You want your blog to look interesting, but if the look takes away from the writing, I believe that there is not much need for good writing because the readers will be distracted most of the time.
Just scrolling through I only noticed a few picture recently, whereas there were more in the beginning. It is more interesting if there are pictures on every post, as I saw when following a blog at the beginning of the semester. I think that my group needs to go back through and put pictures on some of our group posts because we are lacking a little there as well.
Another thing that I think would be helpful, or just interesting, is to have a little sentence about the writers of this blog at the top. This sentence does not have to be long or in any depth about these writers, it would just be a simple sentence that makes the reader understand more of why you write how you do, and in a simple way, who you are. I love the title of this blog though, I found it very intriguing and that is why I chose to look at this blog.
I did like how not all the posts on the first page were written in paragraph form. Sometimes it gets easier and more fun to read when each of the blog posts do not look like essays. Overall I would rate this blog very highly. I'm sure that reading it would be more interesting if it was not all about our assignments, but any blog would if it was about our life rather than our assignments. Every blogger has things they could do to make their site, posts, pictures, and their blog in general better, but when all is said and done the author should be the one make every decision about their blog. It doesn't really matter what others think because if they truly care about what is written in the blog, nothing else will really matter.
Written By - Kelsey Robison
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