Thursday, September 17, 2015

Partnered Outline



Hayley's  Exemplification Essay through my eyes:

Intro/Thesis - Social swing dancing benefits my life in a variety of ways.

Example 1 - Get to know other people through dancing with them.  Like in Footloose, they all became like a family through their love for dancing.

Example 2 - Listen to many different kind of music through going swing dancing at different places.

Example 3 - Learn how to move with the music so you don't feel awkward when you go out to dances, everybody follows you because you look like you know what you are doing.

Example 4 - Learning this kind of dance helps to understand history because it was widely popular in our history.

Example 5 - Knowing how to dance also gives a boost of confidence to know that you are really good at something else. 

Example 6 - Swing dancing gives you one more thing to be excited about. 

Conclusion - There are many lessons that you have to learn in life, and swing dancing has taught me many of those lessons.



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Written by - Kelsey Robison

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